Saturday, July 12, 2014

Feeble Change

Erase, her very feeble attempt
forcing idealist into change
in lace, she knows His contempt
culture shocks, abound preempt
corpses largest organ in mange
her dearheart, marches unkempt
forcing idealist into change






7 comments:

  1. i think idealists should not be unwilling to change or at least examine their ways...
    change is not easy but does grow us....

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  2. Even a small change can make a difference ~

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  3. the pain is palpable in this... not easy to erase what we once/or still love...

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  4. Sometimes we need to change.. sometimes we need to raise above the feeble.. at other time why bother with doing anything....

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  5. A very mysterious triolet indeed; was this homicide real or imagined? Did He deserve his fate; probably did. falling out of love is a tricky business rife with pitfall, pathos, & paramour angst. Read this several times, came up with multiple scenarios, as heroine scorned found several possible solutions.

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  6. I have to admit that I'm not sure exactly was this is referring to. However, I really like the flow of it as well as the form.

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